Is this a good conclusion?

Since these three were so bent on revenge. Hamlet and Leartes are the two people who died in order to get revenge Fortinbras was the only one who got out alive while getting the revenge. Revenge is major theme in the play of Hamlet. Revenge was always seen throughout the play. Revenge was the major reason behind three of the main characters of the play, Hamlet and Leartes revenge bought them death and for Fortinbras got the crown. "To have a precious someone to protect will you become truly strong."